2015년 10월 6일 화요일

The Korean youth’s parents should increase the free time for their children. opinion essay 20110168

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Lim jun seok
The Korean youth’s parents should increase the free time for their children.

According to some newspapers, the Korean youth’s leisure time is less than 3 hours per day because of studying. It is a very serious problem. This is very harmful for their health and mentality. Also, this situation is getting worse because of the parents’ concern about them. The parents don’t want their children to get behind, so they make the children busy. However, this does not help them and can ruin their health and relationships. The Korean youth’s free time for sports should be increased by the parents for their physical, mentality health and relationships.

             During spare time, children should develop and enjoy their sport activity such as soccer, basket ball, swim, or badminton. In these days, the Korean youth every day sit at their desk and study all day long in an enclosed space. This habit makes the children’s metabolism slow, so hampers the growth of children. Even though, it can lower the immune system. To prevent these physical problems children should enjoy more various sports during the spare time, so increasing the time for activities is the most important. The activities can solve the above problems, build up children’s physical strength, and make flexible body.

             If the children get the academic stress, they could be under acute stress. This has a bad effect on emotion, personality, and mentality. In some case, it could induce a mental disease or even suicide. The children should spend time with the parents or friends rather than go to academies. The parents should communicate more with children for getting to know them better. While the children hang out with their friends sometimes yell or smile, they can release their psychological stress. The more children spend time with their parents or friends, the better they release the stress, so they could have strong mentality.

             Nowadays, individualism is overflowing, but the group activities during free time could cultivate sociality and consideration. In addition, the children can communicate with other people so that they naturally develop teamwork and relationships. During the growth, they need more time to enjoy group activities for making good relationship that could help them.
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In conclusion, the Korean youth need more time to develop themselves from the physical or mental problems. However, the Korean youth are young, so they need a little help from their parents. They should increase the time they spend with friends and family, and encourage them to enjoy the activity for good relationships rather than force them to attend study academies.

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  1. i agree with you because having free time for childrens could improve their efficiency on their study.

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  2. I have same opinion with you. During free time, children can find their aptitude and they don't need to get stressed from study at that age. They will be imaginative and stay in health by enjoying their free time.

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  4. I absolutely, strongly agree with your opinion. We don't learn something just by studying in the classroom, in the room. We can learn more useful things by outdoor activity. And you know what, I read an article about Korean's amblyopia. Students don't go out and don't get enough sunshine. It damages our eyesight.

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